Smith bw by Corvidima

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Date: 1/15/2009 Views: 90642 Favorites: 434 Comments: 86

Mongoose

Commission for Newenglander. [Fin]

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Foxxor

Looks to be great :3

Mephis

OH goodness, it's another hilarious comic tf sequence. I can't wait. :3

Wappaloochie

Uh, oh... have we seen the last of Henrietta?

kittyboy

This one is going to be good, I can feel it!

Sausages

Ah, poor wording. A wish granting entities' best friend...

Ferator

Can't wait the next, that's a good start

The-jool

Oh lawdy

RedTailedDolphin

XD This is a good concept, I think. Hooray for bad word choice!

MarsJenkar

Bad word choice? We'll have to see if it really was that....;-)

violinmadness

yeah definitly bad word choice, may as well start sprinkling salt and pepper apon yourself =P

Obero

great indiana jones parody, great concept, etc. can't wait to see the rest

kylr23

Hee looks nice so far.

slider

heheheh....mongooses may be effective against a cobra, but I'm not sure about multiple anacondas.

thesorrow

Really, really bad wording on her part. :D

Yellowtherteen

lol saw that one comming :D still nice parody! can't wait to see more of it!

wonderwolf

Carolina might have been a better nairst name.

TygerStrypes

awesome so far!

Wrathofautumn

Whoa...that caught me entirely off guard. for a moment, I half expected another snake tf. This'll be interesting now, a mongoose tf for once. :3

FoxOfWar

I'd call that pretty amusing tf sequence. Want to see more :D

Lizardmaster

I expected that she would shrink but instead of that she grows!

personinthecorner

Definitely thought it was going to be a snake tf... *sigh* Now I have to wait even longer for another good one...

Chrontius

"I will not turn into a snake. It never helps." The *other* rule 34. By the way, is that a part of her *face* falling off in page 4 frame 5?!?

Ryda

Hi this is cool

BossHoss

Bwa-ha-haa! Now she's something that can climb the wall faster than the baddie can run, and HE can be tossed to face the snake instead of her...

IIIIIIIIIIII

Or maybe the changes are too complete and with his plans foiled, the bad guy settles down and opens up a pet shop.

Corvidimus

Chrontius: it's her shirt sleeve - it's ripped in frame 1, at her wrist in frame 4, and falls in frame 5

slider

Heheh...maybe IIIIIIIIIIIIII is right. Maybe the change is complete. Carolina kills the snake, but the bad guy decides to keep her as a pet.

pete

0.0 This is the best thing I've seen in a long while, and I see a lot of stuff.

Masterx

LOL at least she didn't lost her humor in page 6, really good TF! Keep on doing the good work!

james2011

swweet work do more!!!!!!!

Ryda

I love it

Rey

Nothing like cute, yet fierce animals. Love it.

JKrolak

This is probablly a bad time to point out that while mongooses are capable of fighting cobras, they do not fare as well against other snakes. She is far more likely to end up as Anaconda chow due its crushing attack than the other way around. But the overall story is still fun.

Corvidimus

JKrolak: referring to what Lizardmaster mentioned - she's not shrinking :)

Gandalfnho

Nice TF and hilarious story. Good work!

Bahzur

the seventh pic - hilarious!

slider

*Smirk*chuckle*.....snake as a rope...priceless...

FoxOfWar

Okay, that I would call a "win" ;)

Dragon-FangX

So was that all or will there be a twist in the end like with your last little comic? ^^

Sacha

TFTG That evil bastard. :3 Enable to get the final laugh..in more way then one.

Yellowtherteen

lol more then one way. use the faces, use the snake like Indy's whip and climb that, jump. at least those are the ways i can think of. still, nice comic :)

Zax

For whatever reason, the bad guy reminded me of Colonel Sanders. I was chuckling about that for a good five minutes. But I liked the attention paid to the mongoose look. Wish I had this much dedication do to a seq.

PheagleAdler

Maybe it IS Colonel Sanders, he may manage KFC but he does this on the side!

cloakable

"Wear off" *snrrk*

LordMitchell

Judging by cliches...it doesn't wear off!

Masterx

Boy she has much to learn about Tf's..... :) Sacha Why do you think it's a TG as well? I have no clue how to differ male from female mongoose, so an explanation would be appreciated.

Ryda

Wow 0_0 I just wish it had color but still this art is impressively amazing keep going

MichelleMorphette

What fun! I love it when someone's able to mix humor into TFs as well as this. :)

WolfyF

It's not going to wear off, is it?

Amberlink

Wait until it wears off? That will probably be awhile...like maybe...never...Great Sequence so far

Stevenbarber

she is gunna be sorely disappointed...

slider

Snake's not really dead...it wakes up, crushes her...then eats her...

Wrathofautumn

I have a feeling it's not over...something

Ealadubh

All hail the return of the comedy backdround signs...

Therian_Lycan

I LOVE THIS good comdey and i love the art style and i have to agree with the kid wanting to get out of town lol wouldnt want a 5' tall mongoose after my tail LOL FAV's

slider

Heh...this is getting even more amusing.

Jiloscain

Great sequence! Hooray fot the artist and the comissioner!

Yargo

I wouldnt mind her being my teacher

CriMsoN_DraGoN

And here I was expection a anacanda/naga tf >< still good though, cant wait to see the rest!

Aleander

To end so soon... *sigh*

Shadey

the sign is back

Bahzur

very nice series!

Xodiac

Nice conclusion. Or epilogue, really. But funny!

halfpint3991

lol nice ending, the entire comic itself was really good. I have never seen a comic like this so far on transfur

Gandalfnho

Hilarious comic and nice conclusion.

GrauerWolf

Yeeaaaah! Indianaaaaa! More >__<

Kaze_Youko

Nice comic. =) But what happened to her pants at the end? XD

noobfur

Great sequence ^^ Only 1 thing, In the fifth picture it looks like she is becoming alot taller. But in the last picture she looks less tall then a human :P Still the best sequence I have ever seen =D

silvermoon822

INDI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

violinmadness

hahah loving it

Smashmaster12

Lol, Indiana Jones at the end.

Paulrevere

Great sequence, One of the best i've seen in a long time

Siaon

It's a rather fun story, kudos *applauds*

Kenku

Great sequence and love the Indy joke on the end!

Mike-o

Very cute tf, and great story. <3 Indy! ^^

mintypolo

oh and the jokes tole on

Grace_Kismet

You. Win. I LOVE the Jones joke at the end.

SoylentOrange

I thought it was great except for the last panel. No way would a python look like a whip. YOu could get away with a diamondback or a kingsanke or maybe a rattler, by pythons are too thick and pale. :p

Arbitrary

That was hilarious. And awesome artwork too.

Biyomon1994

AWESOME ARTWORK and i like the last 2 pics really nice artwork, Cheers for u!!

WereCatGirl99

I LUV IT I love the mid transformation part where she grows the mongoose features please make it in color : )

Deidara-senpai

More Mongoose!

Clappingallthetime

LOVE THIS ONE

Lycon

Never seen this happen in Indiana Jones, maybe you've got somthing...

CaptainCutter

Last pic Indiana Jones. LOL

wolfguy

This comic is great :D