Guardian of Dimension "dragon tf" (text fix) by Tomek1000

Guardian of Dimension "dragon tf" (text fix) by

Date: 4/17/2014 Views: 28803 Favorites: 121 Comments: 40

Beach
Dragon
Forced Transformation
Magic
Spell
Stone

Hi all here is first page of my new comic and also its my dream that i had last time so well here will be show how all did begin

continue of comic will show on my DA and FA accounts only

Commisions open

leave me PM if you interested

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TheNewlyTransformedYoshi

Wow... Awesome!!

Zackman1996

bad engrish is bad (just joking)

Elliotissokool

>comic sans

Doggard

dammin i hate when that happens ;-)

SpongeBat1

What is this, a TF comic or a poorly translated RPG?

Crissa

Either would be okay with me. I'd love a TF themed RPG.

SpongeBat1

Yeah, even if it was poorly translated (those are usually the best).

Crissa

The text is weird. I'd suggest choosing a size and sticking to it except for exclamations, something pretty easy to read.

Also, text in images is hard to spell/grammar check, and difficult to translate and read for people who have trouble with that.

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

he said pace not place

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

i didnt even notice the grammar mistakes until you pointed them out

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

do you take commisions or requests

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

this pace looks familiar pace?

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

you spelled little wrong even THE water looks strange page 3 panel 2 so much wrong

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

are you doing this on purpose

Tomek1000

english is not my main language and coz i only used it to comunicate in games my grama is not best

Tomek1000

Yes i do

Tomek1000

leave me mesage if you would want commision

Halfwolfhalfgriffin

what langauge do you speak?

Tomek1000

Polish but i got no problems with understund english

Qwertypoop

Never use Google Translate. Ever. If your English isn't good, don't write long sentences; most people don't come here for the plot.

YoshiFan64

I like plot in my tf's...

Higuy

I saw the picture and my brain imedently went 'mystery dungeon! click now!'

Tomek1000

ye i know that mystery dungeons but i didynt get idea for that tf from there

LupustheWolf

I recently had a dream about being a Dragon a few nights ago but the Dragon in my dream was red and white.

Ciervo

Nicely done on the metal effects! :)

TheWorgenWarrior

I recently had a dream about being a werewolf!

LupustheWolf

Stay away from Silver Bullets.

TheWorgenWarrior

i don't think silver bullets existed in my dream.

Incarna

What does the necklace do?

Tomek1000

its part of my soul half is in me and half in it that give me imortal and chance to reinkarnate also if i lose part of body i will get new one ty to that stone on necklace

Rainshadow

galaxy hopping dragons!! totally epic XD

Qwertypoop

Dat grammar

TheWorgenWarrior

Yay u got more pages done!

Elliotissokool

"i live only 1 time"

YOLO

Tomek1000

sorry i dont know english spelling of it

tj532317

YOLO means You Only Live Once :)

TheWorgenWarrior

and my annoying friends keep saying YOLOswag

Crissa

Better! I'll keep an eye out for your comics on FA!

Crisp

Turned into a dragon. Reaction: oh, ok.

A blue stone gets stuck on your neck. Reaction: WTFWTFWTF GET IT OFF ME! THIS IS SO WEIRD!

Is it just me or is something weird going on here?

Tomek1000

maybe he is ok with being dragon XD