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Date: 11/19/2008 Views: 81174 Favorites: 147 Comments: 25

Scent
Wolf

Page 1 - 10. ON HAITUS. I will be finishing this - but been caught up in other projects including my Uni Dissertation and some Commissions. Sorry y'all

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FoxOfWar

Seems interesting... :)

Jowgenetsu

Well this was a nice suprise go Urbanvixan:)

roxas2

the friend looks exactly like the chick who's transforming... but good so far

Urbanvixen

Hmm... Thanks Roxas. I've looked harder at this... What do you reckon? I think it's not actually him that looks like her - it's her that looks like him in the first panel of the second page. That panel's a bit rubbish and I think that's causing it. Thoughts?

Kenku

Lhis looks intreiging!

Blgame

hmm, nothing i can say. Have no interest in it but hey, it seems popular.

Urbanvixen

Heheh. I think that's just cause I'm uploading by increments :) Gets lots of pageviews - not my intention, but if I didn't get the first few pages up, I was never gonna get my ass in gear to finish!

Proarchangel

I like how she is changing to a wolf. Look forward to more.

TwistedMind

that one vamp has a babyface! lol

Urbanvixen

Hehe - Yup. He's based on a friend of mine :)

tfvictim

Love the legs and the nack changing - very nice! Why is the TF starting to hurt her? Could it be that the potion/smoke is making her change into a wolf for good? ;)

Darkrai

You said not to say more boobs.. how about.. more penis? :P

wolfen

I like it so far. Keep it comin.

xVArchonVx

Or a some PG Breast Expansion as an excuse for more rippage :). Although I thought the potion was going to turn her into something different. (Because of some of the dialog)

Cischiral

Good stuff. While you have gone to great lengths to install significant detail I think your approach to shading is a bit understated. Even a small amount of discernable shadow has a huge effect on realism. For example, go to this page: http://pages.zoom.co.uk/nick.towers/tutorials/toon_shading_tutorial/toon_shading_tutorial.html then scroll down to the two images labeled “The Ref Size slider set to maximum, with, and without shadows”. The picture on the left is without shading (but has “lighting” which as far as most artists are concerned is a type of shading) while the picture on the right has a single level of shading but is otherwise identical. The picture on the right has a dramatically increased sense of depth and realism, even with just a single very simple flat color layer of shadow. As you are already great at line art, detail, and color, I think your art would start to really make an impact with more pronounced shading.

Jowgenetsu

"More penis" pfft she dosn't need a real one her metaphsical one is way better. I have to admit I have never seen a TF comic let alone the first attept at one as good as this I'd pay good money for a commision as.....Damn!

Urbanvixen

Darkrai, don't stick it out unless you plan to use it (reference to your ":P) and thanks for the comment - it made me giggle ;)

Urbanvixen

Cheers Cischiral, but I don't use photoshop or anything. All real media. I use GIMP to edit for posting online (and also, for my sins, printed out the fleshtone onto sketchpaper for the vamps to try to get a 'porceline' feel.) I see what you mean though; more overarching contrast on top of the detail. Thanks for the comment; will bear it in mind.

Ottter

The hand in the 9th page reminds me of the first boss in "illusion of gaia'

Loop-garoo

awesome. this has been one of the better tf sequences on transfur that ive seen in a looong time. can't wait for the next panels! :-) (ps. anyone knows whatever happened to faolchu?)

Gnat

PLEASE finish this piece!

Gwolf12321

Awesomeness! please finish, I want to see her "other form"... ;)

Gwolf12321

great writing too!

LevanJess

Great! Can't wait to see the other form, apparently~

Ruphel

When is this gonne be finished? o.o really some years ago. ( was just browsing around )