Lucy has been searching far and wide for a genuine 'magical pond'. Now that she's found one she slowly starts to realize she might not have thought everything through properly.
It's nice to see a narrative post-TF. The flow of the story is clunky in a few places and I would have liked to see the second woman change, but that'd ruin the punchline on page 6.
I thought it was nice but a little predictable when you first uploaded it (up to page 4). Now that it's continuing, however, I love it! Can't wait to see how THIS goes.
Oh, nice! I've always been a fan of exploring the "aftermath" in written TF fiction but I don't think I've seen a post-TF art sequence like this one before, Well done, and let me add my voice to the chorus hoping to see the continuing adventures of these characters. There's no need for gratuitous sock explosions for something to be TF art IMO :)
Love seeing the aftermath on a sequence, it's refreshing. Also, in my opinion, best tf is the sort that happens behind the scenes. Seems very interesting, this story... ;)
Yes! We MUST see more of this! How will "Muffy-Wuffy" take this ? Is he ready to have _kits_ instead of kids? What will the neighbors say? Tune in next time for "The Young and the Furry"..... 7@=e
It's nice, Fennex, but I felt that it didn't flow as well as it could have. It would have helped to have more scenes of the actual TFs, but overall it was a really nice work. Now if only we could have weekly updates of Doc's Lab, like MWE did...
Heh, pretty cute story. Anxious to see how it turns out. I guess she was expecting to be something of a giant otter instead. Now, I wonder how that pond water got into the shower... hmm..
Now I'm wondering if it only effects cis women, or if trans women are vulnerable, too. Does the curse target the mind, or the genes? So many questions...
I also like the post-transformation storylines. I recently found a webcomic that explores the same type of thing in a fantasy setting (SFW). TG TF (to another sapient species) http://www.valsalia.com/
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pete
God, I hope there is more!
Drax2471
LOL I hope so too
Jeran1221
Cool
Shadey
That's neat hon.
Wilsjam2uk
I love it
Wappaloochie
Hilarious as hell... I love it! :)
pakeshde
does he want kids.. OH man.. thats SO going to get him in a heap of trouble... PSST..dude..she shaves more then her legs now.. RUN fool run ;)
Yargo
some parts are a little hard to follow but comic looks like a lot of fun :)
Cobalt_K
It's nice to see a narrative post-TF. The flow of the story is clunky in a few places and I would have liked to see the second woman change, but that'd ruin the punchline on page 6.
Xodiac
I thought it was nice but a little predictable when you first uploaded it (up to page 4). Now that it's continuing, however, I love it! Can't wait to see how THIS goes.
Mister_munk
Excellent work, i would like to see what happens next
Wolfswift
This is awesome, otters are so cool. Hope to see this continue soon.
LostTank
cool comic so far, i'm guessing by how it stopped that there is more still coming?
SeanJ
kinda sucks that the whole TF was out of view. :(
BryanD
Oh, nice! I've always been a fan of exploring the "aftermath" in written TF fiction but I don't think I've seen a post-TF art sequence like this one before, Well done, and let me add my voice to the chorus hoping to see the continuing adventures of these characters. There's no need for gratuitous sock explosions for something to be TF art IMO :)
Procyonidae
I'm completely dense. I don't think I have any idea what's going on.
MarleneB
"muffy-wuffy"? >chortles<
Fenchurch
Ah, welcome to Transfur! =-3 Great stuff!
FoxOfWar
Love seeing the aftermath on a sequence, it's refreshing. Also, in my opinion, best tf is the sort that happens behind the scenes. Seems very interesting, this story... ;)
Luciusappaloosius
Yes! We MUST see more of this! How will "Muffy-Wuffy" take this ? Is he ready to have _kits_ instead of kids? What will the neighbors say? Tune in next time for "The Young and the Furry"..... 7@=e
vertigo
Wait... do they shrink over time?
Chipfox
I really liked seeing the what happens after but i was a little confused at parts too. keep up the good work!
Sacha
Luciusappaloosius,You pretty much summed the majority of our responses. x3 This type of TF is truely a portent of good things to come.
personinthecorner
It's nice, Fennex, but I felt that it didn't flow as well as it could have. It would have helped to have more scenes of the actual TFs, but overall it was a really nice work. Now if only we could have weekly updates of Doc's Lab, like MWE did...
Compudemon
refreshingly different to have a plot centered around what happens after a tf
LordMitchell
Okay, now this is HILARIOUS.
Bigwhitetpolarbear
Heh, pretty cute story. Anxious to see how it turns out. I guess she was expecting to be something of a giant otter instead. Now, I wonder how that pond water got into the shower... hmm..
twilit_wolf_link
Hah. Had a good chortle over that one. Ahhh... Good times, good times. (and great job)
Lunis24
Lol! This is too hilarious! I cant wait for more!
werewolf4831
will they find a cure?
whogives
was there a first? because ti b itneresting 2 see her taking the pond dip and change
kahnel
Sexist curse wow think i've seen it all now. Love the story and the art works great.
returnoftheslipper
"she did it" XD
Nitrinoxus
It's nice to see more out of this concept; I thought it was good the first time, and it only got better with time.
You're one of the better artists here, which leaves me to wonder why you haven't posted on any of the mainstream Internet Galleries.
tatsumasa91
Om nom nom
Redapple
MAKE MORE PLEASE!
Higuy
Hey, is that all? cuz I think people really want a sequel
Michman
Loved it the 1st time I saw this, and now I'm diggin' it even more!!!
crispix
Is that a man in a wig?
ben9
Fold the towel
... I would not expect a pet to do that
Akai
Exactly. It was a test, and her folding it, means she's busted.
Nargus
*giggles* "Do my dishes~"
Akai
I stand corrected. Are there really otters who can fold towels? At least I guessed right she'd get busted, just not so vocally.
hihijk3210
I totally thought you were gonna be right, but we forgot one thing. Otters are great towel-folders.
Kuzim
is the woman in the green dress supposed to be a transvestite? otherwise the stubble is very strange?
Luciusappaloosius
Pretty sure it's a drag queen: the curse only affects women, apparently. 7@=Q
Canton
Now I'm wondering if it only effects cis women, or if trans women are vulnerable, too. Does the curse target the mind, or the genes? So many questions...
JoJoJoshua
I love the idea, but as others have said I had trouble following what was happening. Fun though!
Compudemon
hmm magic pond water in the house what could go wrong...
Cathrope
Ok, Rick is bit of a jerk. And by bit I mean a lot.
Stevep
I also like the post-transformation storylines. I recently found a webcomic that explores the same type of thing in a fantasy setting (SFW). TG TF (to another sapient species) http://www.valsalia.com/
Anybody know of any others like this?
wolfguy
thanks for the recommendation ^.^ I enjoy reading the valsalia comic
tezarak
Is there any more coming?