Noticing 2 by KrazyIvan

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Date: 9/19/2018 Views: 39154 Favorites: 386 Comments: 86

Bathtub
Confused
Forced Transformation
Fox
Worried

Yeah i know, i said the last one was the finale but this is technically the prologue to the next sequence which i may just keep updating on this since its nice and easy to view.

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KrazyIvan

Shout out to MR Nibz my first patron, this one's for you bud.

Greythorne

Might good ol' Nibz have a story to go along with this image...?

KrazyIvan

nah, he didnt ask for this, im just thanking him.

Greythorne

Well regardless, she's lovely. Hope to see more of her.

KrazyIvan

More delivered

whogives

ty for continuing this she def looked confused in second one now worried and confused in last =p

KrazyIvan

no idea if i should be shouting out account names of people on patreon (i know some like to keep real names off these) but just got my 2nd patron and i'd like to thank him/her.

sm64fan1234567890

this should be an anthro tf

sergeantscribblez

i will have a story hopefully by mid tomorrow? i had a migraine, and i am still feeling kinda bad :(

KrazyIvan

no worries:P

sergeantscribblez

surprisingly, migraine got me out in my spelling bee

sergeantscribblez

Kinda stuck right now, trying to think of what the cause of tf is. I know it was forced, but I can't think of anything...

Selden

Maybe the guy she turned down flat last night was a warlock who's making sure she looks like a foxy lady whether she likes it or not.

whogives

she more looks like she going "huh that looks weird..." then confsued and def doesnt look worried

KrazyIvan

yeah i guess

BenReillyUK

Thank you for truly lovely pic.

metalhead616

Excited to see you intend to continue this! :)

KrazyIvan

Wrote an idea for a narrative based on this

KrazyIvan

"Molly unable to process the sheer volume of questions racing through her mind at that current moment glances around the room. She spots her towel and goes to grab it, holding it with her receding thumbs she decides to wrap her head to cover her massive ears. Mollys room mate bangs again jolting the towel from her hands. "one minute!" Molly yells. Molly bends to retrieve it but finds her hands unable to grip it, even her fingers have become too stiff to even hook it. Terror grips molly as she stumbles to the floor to fumble with the fabric, she manages with both hands to grip it and throw it on her head. Molly tucks her paws in her shorts and takes one quick moment to gaze at her reflection. The figure before her is twisted and haunched, the slim toned body she was so proud of was becoming something monstrous. "this isthn't gonna work" Molly lisped with her muzzle. Molly grips the bolt with her teeth and yanks it aside and the door creaks open, Molly peaks out to find the hall empty.

KrazyIvan

She staggers/half runs back to her dorm, luckily the door was ajar or the door knob would of been beyond her abilities. She stumbles in and noses the door closed. Molly realises she's on all fours and how natural it feels, with a start she jumps back up in protest. Her two legged stance wobbles and hurts but she will not give in to what ever this is. Molly wobbles over to her chair mindful of her tail which now bushes large behind her. Molly overcome with emotions remembers her tutors words; "in times of crisis keep calm and evaluate your problem and start tackling it one piece at a time". Though this problem wasn't anything near what she'd expected to have to deal with she pawed open the lid on her laptop. Luckily it wasn't locked, but her paws were not gonna be typing. "Caawtana, loook upth shponthanios.......thransformhashion" Molly lisped. She had difficulties with the words not just in pronunciation but also in comprehension. "Im sorry i didn't understand your question"

KrazyIvan

Cortana responds bluntly. Molly blinks the letters on the keyboard looked foreign to her, she understood they were letters but she couldn't figure out which were which. "Cooortana why didth i thurn intho ay animal?" What was that word she used before? Cortana: "Here are some search results for you" Molly's gaze was directed to strings of blue shapes with a straight lines beneath them, but molly lost interest, a moving image in a small box caught her eyes, it was some kind of food. "No" Molly shouted shaking her head. She had to find a way out, the bright box on the table flickered, the light annoying to her. Molly slid out of her chair She was uncomfortable, she knew she had to figure out how to become human again, the box on the table didn't have to answers. Molly tries to rise up from the floor but her back prevents her, she looks at her arms they're fully canine now, her legs still showing the pink nail polish on her claws but nothing else. A loud knocking on one of the walls,

KrazyIvan

a hazy word bubbled up in molly's mind, "the door, my door" molly thought. A garble of sounds came out of it. They sounded angry Molly recognised her name but nothing else. The scent was familiar though and she knew they were friendly despite their manner. "That must be my human" she thought, she couldn't quite remember her name but she knew her. The garble of sounds from the door started again this time louder, Molly whined, she didn't like her being upset. The door opened, Molly ears flattened her tail wagged lowly she stood submissively. Her human looked at her in confusion then looked around the room, Molly understood she was being called. She yapped in response, she felt happy and hungry but mostly happy everything was good.

Megan: "I dont know where she went, i had no idea she was keeping an animal in her dorm" On her phone Megan explains to her friend Trisha. "Perhaps it was for her biology course? crackled the response".

KrazyIvan

Yeah maybe but the student accommodation has very strict rules on pets. She wouldn't risk losing her home" Megan said. "Well i guess i'd better hand this little guy in downstairs, he's affectionate at least but foxes aren't pets". Megan hangs up and scratches the foxes chin. "Come on little guy we're gonna go meet some people who'll give you a good home". Megan passes a mirror on her way out, "that's odd" she thought, When did i pain my lips black?

The End

KrazyIvan

I prefer my TF's to be a bit more drawn out, check out: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1436586&page=submissions

This guy in my opinion is one of the best TF writers out there, this story: https://www.literotica.com/s/familiar-friends-ch-02

might be the best in suspense and pacing, as well as for you TG fans there's:

https://www.literotica.com/s/mine-71

His most recent and probably his best written piece. Glad to be of service, feel free to suggest any of your own material.

metalhead616

oh my god. that was awesome.

jimbo8472

Me too I have comited myself to doing tf's 30 pages long.

nekonomicon

The story was not at all what I imagined from the art. What a difference it is...

Bosko11

To be honnest, who wouldnt like this to be you'r everyday morning routeene :D

Molly

she just keeps getting more and more beautiful

Tzell

such a pretty girl. I wish she had slitted foxy eyes

KrazyIvan

Are you the same tzell that wrote "thats what you get for compassion"?

KrazyIvan

If so holy shit a legend walks among us.

Tzell

Why yes, yes I am. wait really? I mean thank you but the story was a bit...well.. my english writing skills were very..lacking. alot of people seemed to like the slow pacing however, which is my favorite thing in TF ever *tailwaggy*

KrazyIvan

I didn't wee anything wrong with your English, the only thing i would criticise, is the lack of paragraphs but the story is solid and one of my favourites from the "old days". I've only recently started contributing to this culture but I've been a consumer since the late 90's and your story has really stuck with me through the years and influences my work. So yes legend is perfectly fitting.

KrazyIvan

For anyone wondering:

http://docs-lab.com/submissions/318/thats-what-you-get-for-compassion

Enjoy :)

Tzell

Thank you! I'm very happy to know the story actually stuck with you! I should re-write it, or made a spiritual successorrrrrwrrarf

KrazyIvan

Another in that style would be great:3

rehtlh

This is so good

KrazyIvan

As per request from one of my patrons I've started work on the next chapter: Noticing 3: Megan's tail. I've posted it on my Patreon page but i wont release it here (and with images) until the work is done so stay posted. :3

Army1

this is getting even more cool o3o

KrazyIvan

Tzell commanded it and so it shall be, better eyes this time, sorry though none of my reference material showed slitted eyes, hope this is fine for you :3

tenkokukutiw

It's beautiful work I'm forced to get it down

KrazyIvan

Part 5: Towel's for drying, not for hiding, silly fox.

Army1

oh my, shes being feral now :o

jimbo8472

I love the way you made her head hair blends into her fur coat as the tf progresses.

KrazyIvan

Thanks, i don't like it when tf just has the hair vanish or fall out. Its a missed opportunity, but a bitch to colour so i can understand.

Chiron28

The Mind is simplifying by frame 5. Reasoning behind the concept of shirts is slipping. I personally don't exactly enjoy complete feral TF's as it feels to much like the death of an individual, but it is being portrayed very well regardless.

nekonomicon

I agree. I guess people really like the situation of turning into a completely different creature.

Personally I would love to just slip in and out of the mindset

KrazyIvan

taking a short break on this to do a course and do some private work for patreons

nekonomicon

Will this be continued beyond the latest drawing?

Piro

Hot damn keep drawing

KrazyIvan

this just became the most favourited thing ive ever done, woot!

Cischiral

Love it.

Farmfox

Your improvement has been incredible, Ivan. This sequence is amazing, especially #4. Keep up the great work.

KrazyIvan

Thanks man, i s'pose its just about finding what you want to do rather than what you should do.

Nothingsp

Now I'm just thinking of that one "Far Side..."

rehtlh

I am such a fan of how the understanding of language is slipping away but she can still recognize her name. That's so good.

KrazyIvan

yeah not everyone's too hot on the mental changes, i knew someone would be :P

Tzell

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~

nekonomicon

I figured because of the muzzle and mouth changes it's just harder to talk.

I wasn't expecting mental changes though

KrazyIvan

Part 7: Words are hard

nekonomicon

Accidental sheep

tenkokukutiw

Hermosa trabajo sigue asi.

Wolfenone76

Great work very cute.

Michman

It's brilliant!

Mweef

This is great! Please make more sequences like these.

Lizard

Great stuff

Shaprite

Foxy lady

Commander

Amazing work! Will there be another page?

mogosworld

Are you gonna continue with this? It’s awesome so far.

KrazyIvan

back by popular demand.

lawd_roxie

Honestly one of my favorite artists man, good stuff.

slaton22

Wish we had 2 more with her in her shirt on standing on all fours and last with her with no shirt on all fours thinking of a mate

KrazyIvan

check out my patreon page, im working on a sequel

Michman

Um, I'm noticing two different names... I'm confused.

KrazyIvan

two different names?

wildkatt

It seems like the foxy-Lady was refered to as Molly and then Sam.

Really enjoying your work.

KrazyIvan

Oh yeah i've written a long ass story as a sequel, and I've changed some details. Good point id actually forgotten she was called molly.

Michman

Molly and Sam...

KrazyIvan

Yeah her name's Sam now, think of it as Molly was her nick name but Sam is more formal

KrazyIvan

Sam as in samantha

tenkokukutiw

I love this story

sergeantscribblez

Dude, its funny how awesome this became over three months :)

Army1

yay, new page^^ also she has her under her "nose" x3

noclip

I suggest making a new page for the sequel instead of updating here, just because of how commenting works on Transfur; It may seem a bit...crowded after awhile, especially if the sequel is exceptionally long.

lumberwood

If you notice, in panel 8, she still looks slightly human (though that may be because she's still wearing clothes). But in panel 9, a.k.a. the panel that originally wasn't going to be included, she looks completely...erm, "foxified".